Prompt: Writing is a process, and the first draft is rarely perfect. Strong writers improve their work through revision. After reviewing and revising your literary argument paragraph, what changes did you make to strengthen your writing?
Prompt: Writing is a process, and the first draft is rarely perfect. Strong writers improve their work through revision. After reviewing and revising your literary argument paragraph, what changes did you make to strengthen your writing? Prompt Response: I realized I completely forgot to add quotes and evidence into my writing. I am not sure how I forgot to put it into my writing but I did. I made sure to add quotes into both of my evidence sections. I also fixed some small spelling and grammar errors. I also decided to make my conclusion sound stronger and more to the point of my argument. Summary: I was not at school because I had a raging headache, but I still got my work done. Reflection: I am feeling a little better about my essay but still a little scared.